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Hehe. First off, Welcome to the world of Fruityloops!
You're right it does have an odd but compelling theme to it. I like you dude. You got imagination and a hell of a lot of potential. Your other music shows you have a good grasp on FL's functions. You remind me of how I was when I first started off. Keep it up man. Just a few things though.
1. Be careful when using phasers and flangers, make sure theyre not to dominant, it just doesnt sound good.
2. Dont EVER put electric guitar in trance music. ESPECIALLY the Fruity Slayer.
3. And finally, don't ever let anyone say your not good enough.

Look out Paul Okenfold..

Let me start by saying that it takes a lot to please me, when it comes to rave/trance music, im a perfectionist. And in listening to this song, all I can say is "Look out Paul Okenfold, cos here comes Ultimus."

Your use of synths and sound evects astounds me, extreamly well mastered in 99% of the song. However this said, i would have to concure with Sonic in that your chirping synth was too overpowering.

As for the main synth, very nicely done, love the rave atmosphere. However, it would have been nice for some percussion variation. The drum loop seems to be used almost all through-out the track.

Overall though, this is definatly a masterpiece. I would have loved to have been able to call it my own.

Respect.